Publius (Alexander Hamilton) · the Independent Journal, New York · October 27, 1787
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To the People of the State of New York:
AFTER an unequivocal experience of the inefficacy of the subsisting Fœderal Government, you are called upon to deliberate on a new Constitution for the United States of America.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metamisfire: frame collision — the proposition the opposition denied sits in a temporal adjunct, "AFTER an unequivocal experience of the inefficacy," where the only thing the sentence asserts is that the reader is called upon to deliberate; the plan announced six paragraphs down schedules the proof of that inefficacy for a later numberThe subject speaks its own importance; comprehending in its consequences, nothing less than the existence of the UNION, the safety and welfare of the parts of which it is composed, the fate of an empire, in many respects, the most interesting in the world.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe importance is assigned to the subject rather than argued for it; a question that speaks its own importance needs no advocate to establish that it matters, and the reader who thinks the Confederation adequate has already been told what he is trifling withIt has been frequently remarked, that it seems to have been reserved to the people of this country, by their conduct and example, to decide the important question, whether societies of men are really capable or not, of establishing good government from reflection and choice, or whether they are forever destined to depend, for their political constitutions, on accident and force.Report — Relay another's utterance. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metathe essay's governing frame arrives as a commonplace with no author — "It has been frequently remarked" names no remarker — so it enters the argument already granted, and nobody on the page is answerable for itIf there be any truth in the remark, the crisis, at which we are arrived, may with propriety be regarded as the æra in which that decision is to be made; and a wrong election of the part we shall act, may, in this view, deserve to be considered as the general misfortune of mankind.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metamisfire: frame collision — three hedges carry the frame in ("If there be any truth," "may with propriety," "in this view") and it settles the meaning of a vote before an argument has run: under it, a rejection of this particular plan is a verdict on whether men can govern themselves by choice at all, and the cost is charged to mankind rather than to New York
This idea will add the inducements of philanthropy to those of patriotism to heighten the solicitude, which all considerate and good men must feel for the event.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe reader's feeling and the membership it certifies are supplied in one clause; a reader who does not feel the solicitude has been given a name for himself before the argument beginsHappy will it be if our choice should be directed by a judicious estimate of our true interests, unperplexed and unbiased by considerations not connected with the public good.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe standard of a legitimate decision is installed here and given up in the next sentence; the standard is what survives, and every later argument on either side must now be measured against itBut this is a thing more ardently to be wished, than seriously to be expected.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardThe plan offered to our deliberations, affects too many particular interests, innovates upon too many local institutions, not to involve in its discussion a variety of objects foreign to its merits, and of views, passions and prejudices little favorable to the discovery of truth.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe corruption of the debate is deduced from the plan's reach, which makes the prediction hold whatever anyone actually goes on to say
Among the most formidable of the obstacles which the new Constitution will have to encounter, may readily be distinguished the obvious interest of a certain class of men in every State to resist all changes which may hazard a diminution of the power, emolument and consequence of the offices they hold under the State-establishments—and the perverted ambition of another class of men, who will either hope to aggrandize themselves by the confusions of their country, or will flatter themselves with fairer prospects of elevation from the subdivision of the empire into several partial confederacies, than from its union under one Government.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metamisfire: frame collision — two categories are supplied into which any opponent can be sorted, and the paragraph that follows withdraws the writer's design to dwell on them while leaving them standing; a reader who accepts the withdrawal keeps the sorting
It is not, however, my design to dwell upon observations of this nature.Retraction — Withdraw a claim already made. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: metawhat the withdrawal covers is the design to dwell; the two classes above are left where they are, and the essay never returns either to defend them or to take them backI am well aware that it would be disingenuous to resolve indiscriminately the opposition of any set of men (merely because their situations might subject them to suspicion) into interested or ambitious views:Mismatch-repair — Name the scope or orientation gap itself. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metathe interpretive error is named one paragraph after the paragraph that commits it, and the word carrying the repair is "indiscriminately," which concedes the reading and reserves it for the discriminatingCandor will oblige us to admit, that even such men may be actuated by upright intentions;Counter-signal — Decline an expected status marker to imply that one’s standing needs no proof. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe imputation a ratification pamphlet is expected to make is declined, and declining it costs nothing: no man has been named to whom the concession could attach, and the party obliging the admission is Candor rather than the writerand it cannot be doubted, that much of the opposition which has made its appearance, or may hereafter make its appearance, will spring from sources, blameless at least, if not respectable; the honest errors of minds led astray by preconceived jealousies and fears.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe concession grants motive and withdraws judgment inside one clause: blameless at least, if not respectable, and led astraySo numerous indeed and so powerful are the causes, which serve to give a false bias to the judgment, that we, upon many occasions, see wise and good men on the wrong as well as on the right side of questions, of the first magnitude to society.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwarda wrong side is presupposed by the sentence that distributes good men evenly across both, and the paragraph above has already indicated which side it isThis circumstance, if duly attended to, would furnish a lesson of moderation to those, who are ever so much persuaded of their being in the right, in any controversy.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe only directive on the page, and it carries no imperative and no addressee; the reader is left to decide whether he is among those persuaded of their being in the right, which by the sentence's own account he is the worst judge ofAnd a further reason for caution, in this respect, might be drawn from the reflection, that we are not always sure, that those who advocate the truth are influenced by purer principles than their antagonists.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe paragraph's suspicion turns onto the writer's own side here, and it arrives hedged twice and in the first person plural — "might be drawn," "not always sure"Ambition, avarice, personal animosity, party opposition, and many other motives, not more laudable than these, are apt to operate as well upon those who support, as upon those who oppose, the right side of a question.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardmotives are distributed evenly across the question and rightness is not: "the right side" survives the symmetry intact, and it has an occupantWere there not even these inducements to moderation, nothing could be more ill-judged than that intolerant spirit, which has, at all times, characterized political parties. For, in politics as in religion, it is equally absurd to aim at making proselytes by fire and sword. Heresies in either can rarely be cured by persecution.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe paragraph closes by making intolerance a fault of method, which leaves the writer's own certainty about the question untouched; heresy keeps its name and only the persecution is given up
And yet however just these sentiments will be allowed to be, we have already sufficient indications, that it will happen in this as in all former cases of great national discussion. A torrent of angry and malignant passions will be let loose.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardTo judge from the conduct of the opposite parties, we shall be led to conclude, that they will mutually hope to evince the justness of their opinions, and to increase the number of their converts by the loudness of their declamations, and the bitterness of their invectives.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outward"the opposite parties" and "mutually" put the writer outside both of them, one paragraph before he declares which one he belongs toAn enlightened zeal for the energy and efficiency of government will be stigmatized, as the offspring of a temper fond of despotic power, and hostile to the principles of liberty.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metamisfire: frame collision — the objection is filed as a stigma before it is made, and its answer is built into the description of the thing objected to: the zeal is enlightened in the same sentence that predicts it will be called despoticAn over scrupulous jealousy of danger to the rights of the people, which is more commonly the fault of the head than of the heart, will be represented as mere pretence and artifice; the stale bait for popularity at the expense of public good.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe matching prediction for the other side, whose position enters as "over scrupulous" and a fault of the head where the first entered as "enlightened"; the symmetry lives in the syntax aloneIt will be forgotten, on the one hand, that jealousy is the usual concomitant of violent love, and that the noble enthusiasm of liberty is too apt to be infected with a spirit of narrow and illiberal distrust.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardOn the other hand, it will be equally forgotten, that the vigor of Government is essential to the security of liberty; that, in the contemplation of a sound and well-informed judgment, their interest can never be separated; and that a dangerous ambition more often lurks behind the specious mask of zeal for the rights of the people, than under the forbidding appearance of zeal for the firmness and efficiency of Government.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe two limbs of "equally forgotten" are not equal in weight: the first concedes a temperamental excess, the second states the essay's thesis and adds a charge of concealed ambition against one side of the question onlyHistory will teach us, that the former has been found a much more certain road to the introduction of despotism, than the latter; and that of those men who have overturned the liberties of republics the greatest number have begun their career, by paying an obsequious court to the people; commencing Demagogues, and ending Tyrants.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: orientation mismatch — the warrant offered is the authority of History, which produces no republic and no demagogue by name; and the essay that renounced the imputation of motives one paragraph earlier closes its account of the opposing temper with a career that ends in tyranny (low confidence)
In the course of the preceding observations I have had an eye, my Fellow-Citizens, to putting you upon your guard against all attempts, from whatever quarter, to influence your decision in a matter of the utmost moment to your welfare by any impressions other than those which may result from the evidence of truth.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metafive paragraphs are refiled here as a caution against being influenced, among them the one that sorted the opposition into officeholders and the ambitiousYou will, no doubt, at the same time, have collected from the general scope of them that they proceed from a source not unfriendly to the new Constitution.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe disclosure is credited to the reader as something he has already worked out, and it is made in litotes: a source "not unfriendly"Yes, my Countrymen, I own to you, that, after having given it an attentive consideration, I am clearly of opinion, it is your interest to adopt it.Avowal — Constitute the self in the saying. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: reflexivethe partisan is brought into being by the sentence; up to this point the essay has an argument and no declared advocate, and the advocate it now has is a signatureI am convinced, that this is the safest course for your liberty, your dignity, and your happiness.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardI affect not reserves, which I do not feel. I will not amuse you with an appearance of deliberation, when I have decided.Counter-signal — Decline an expected status marker to imply that one’s standing needs no proof. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe marker declined is the open mind the form of the address would otherwise require, and declining it buys more than holding it would: a writer who admits he has decided is trusted with the reasons he is about to giveI frankly acknowledge to you my convictions, and I will freely lay before you the reasons on which they are founded.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardThe consciousness of good intentions disdains ambiguity.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardan aphorism doing the work of a warrant: the candour of the two sentences before it is offered as evidence of the intentions behind them, and the inference runs only in that directionI shall not however multiply professions on this head. My motives must remain in the depository of my own breast: My arguments will be open to all, and may be judged of by all.Avatar-speech — Speak as a constructed posting-self. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: reflexivemisfire: reflexive misfire — the sentence reserves an interior and offers the arguments alone for judgment, which is the division a signature exists to make; a reader who files it as one man's reticence takes for a choice what the persona makes compulsory, and the breast in question went on to hold eighty-five numbers written by three handsThey shall at least be offered in a spirit which will not disgrace the cause of truth.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe only undertaking made about the arguments themselves concerns the spirit in which they arrive, and "at least" fixes that as the floor
I propose, in a series of papers, to discuss the following interesting particulars.—The utility of the UNION to your political prosperity—The insufficiency of the present Confederation to preserve that Union—The necessity of a Government at least equally energetic with the one proposed, to the attainment of this object—The conformity of the proposed Constitution to the true principles of republican Government—Its analogy to your own state constitution—and lastly, The additional security, which its adoption will afford to the preservation of that species of Government, to liberty, and to property.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardsix headings, each carrying its finding: "The insufficiency of the present Confederation" and "The necessity of a Government at least equally energetic with the one proposed" are the conclusions of arguments not yet written, entered here as subjects
In the progress of this discussion I shall endeavor to give a satisfactory answer to all the objections which shall have made their appearance, that may seem to have any claim to your attention.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe undertaking is bounded twice, by "endeavor" and by a filter on which objections have any claim to attention; the writer applies the filter
It may perhaps be thought superfluous to offer arguments to prove the utility of the UNION, a point, no doubt, deeply engraved on the hearts of the great body of the people in every State, and one, which it may be imagined, has no adversaries.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe position about to be answered is first described as one nobody holds, which makes whoever holds it exceptional before a single holder has been producedBut the fact is, that we already hear it whispered in the private circles of those who oppose the new Constitution, that the Thirteen States are of too great extent for any general system, and that we must of necessity, resort to separate confederacies of distinct portions of the whole.Report — Relay another's utterance. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metamisfire: frame collision — the relayed doctrine has no speaker, no circle and no date, and by its own account was whispered; the reader can neither check it nor find anyone to hold to it, and the next number is written against it (low confidence)This doctrine will, in all probability, be gradually propagated, till it has votaries enough to countenance an open avowal of it.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe forecast seals itself: silence confirms the whispering stage, and any open statement of the doctrine confirms the propagationFor nothing can be more evident, to those who are able to take an enlarged view of the subject, than the alternative of an adoption of the new Constitution or a dismemberment of the Union.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: orientation mismatch — the essay's governing dichotomy is warranted by the reader's membership among those able to take an enlarged view; a reader who sees a third course is met by the qualifier rather than by an argumentIt will, therefore, be of use to begin by examining the advantages of that Union, the certain evils, and the probable dangers, to which every State will be exposed from its dissolution.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe next number's subject is fixed together with its findings: the evils are certain and the dangers probable before the examination has begunThis shall accordingly constitute the subject of my next address.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwarda commitment the writer can keep only by continuing to exist; the name signing it made good on the plan across eighty-five numbers, and the second of them, four days later, was written by another man
The divergences
"whether societies of men are really capable or not, of establishing good government from reflection and choice, or whether they are forever destined to depend, for their political constitutions, on accident and force" — a reader weighing a plan of government files a Report of a commonplace, offered as background; a reader about to vote files a Frame-set under which his rejection of this plan becomes evidence on the question. They part on target: a remark relayed about the world, or a move on the frame that grades every move after it. "It has been frequently remarked" names no remarker, which is what lets the frame enter as property already held in common — and the frame is installed in the second paragraph of the first number, before a clause of the Constitution has been discussed.
"Candor will oblige us to admit, that even such men may be actuated by upright intentions" — an opponent reading in New York files an Assertion, a concession granted and worth having; the paragraph around it files a Counter-signal, since no man is named to whom the concession attaches and what it yields is the writer's standing. They part on motive. The clause immediately after settles the concession's terms: sincerity is granted and judgment taken back — "the honest errors of minds led astray by preconceived jealousies and fears." Jefferson's first inaugural makes the same move under a signature that can be held to it, and pays for it in office.
"the obvious interest of a certain class of men in every State to resist all changes which may hazard a diminution of the power, emolument and consequence of the offices they hold under the State-establishments" — a subscriber files an Assertion about an incentive he can check against his own state government; the state officeholder files a Frame-set that has pre-filed every objection he will make for the next nine months. They part on function. The essay is addressed to the people of the state whose governor led the opposition to the plan, and it names nobody, which is what keeps both filings alive.
"I will not amuse you with an appearance of deliberation, when I have decided" — one reader files a Counter-signal, a partisan declining an open mind he does not have and gaining by the refusal more than the pose would return; another files an Avowal that ends the essay's standing as a caution. They part on target: the sentence acts on the writer's credit, or on the writer. Six sentences earlier the same paragraph put the reader on guard against "all attempts, from whatever quarter, to influence your decision."
"My motives must remain in the depository of my own breast: My arguments will be open to all, and may be judged of by all" — a reader who takes the writer for a man files an Avowal, reticence about an interior he has; a reader who takes him for a signature files Avatar-speech, in which the reserved interior is what the persona is made of. They part on target — outward reserve, or a constructed self performing it. The rule the sentence installs is the rule a pseudonym needs, and by the second number, four days later, the breast belonged to a second man; before the series closed, to a third.
"nothing can be more evident, to those who are able to take an enlarged view of the subject, than the alternative of an adoption of the new Constitution or a dismemberment of the Union" — a Federalist files an Assertion stating the two outcomes on offer; a delegate who wants amendments before ratification files a Frame-set that has removed his position from the list of things that may be proposed. They part on scope: read narrow, a claim about two futures; read wide, a rule about which futures are admissible. The New York convention sat six weeks in the summer of 1788 and ratified with a list of proposed amendments attached — the course this sentence says is not there.
"I propose, in a series of papers, to discuss the following interesting particulars.—The utility of the UNION to your political prosperity—The insufficiency of the present Confederation to preserve that Union" — a subscriber files a Promise to argue six questions; the list files a Frame-set, since the second particular is the conclusion of an argument entered as a subject. They part on function: an undertaking to discuss, or a settlement of what the discussion will find. The essay's opening clause has already treated that same insufficiency as an "unequivocal experience," which is the finding the second particular is scheduled to establish.