Pericles, as Thucydides reconstructs him · the public sepulchre, Athens · winter, 431 BC
text: Thucydides, The Peloponnesian War, in Richard Crawley's translation (1874) · published before 1931, in the public domain · filed complete — the filing reads the acts of the English text, and says so where an act would hang on the Greek
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"Most of my predecessors in this place have commended him who made this speech part of the law, telling us that it is well that it should be delivered at the burial of those who fall in battle.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe oration opens by naming the statute that compels it, which files everything after as a duty discharged rather than a choice made; the frame is installed inside the speech the frame requiresFor myself, I should have thought that the worth which had displayed itself in deeds would be sufficiently rewarded by honours also shown by deeds; such as you now see in this funeral prepared at the people's cost.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metadissent from the custom, entered before compliance with it; the speaker's own preference would have ended the ceremony one act earlier, at the graveAnd I could have wished that the reputations of many brave men were not to be imperilled in the mouth of a single individual, to stand or fall according as he spoke well or ill.Articulation — Render a felt sense into words; the saying changes it. function: expressive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: reflexivethe stake is set at the reputations of the dead, and the risk to them is located in one mouth — the one about to speak for the next three thousand wordsFor it is hard to speak properly upon a subject where it is even difficult to convince your hearers that you are speaking the truth.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metaOn the one hand, the friend who is familiar with every fact of the story may think that some point has not been set forth with that fullness which he wishes and knows it to deserve; on the other, he who is a stranger to the matter may be led by envy to suspect exaggeration if he hears anything above his own nature.Mismatch-repair — Name the scope or orientation gap itself. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metathe two filings the coming praise will receive are named in advance and sorted by the hearer's relation to the dead: the friend measures against what he knows, the stranger against himselfFor men can endure to hear others praised only so long as they can severally persuade themselves of their own ability to equal the actions recounted: when this point is passed, envy comes in and with it incredulity.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwarda ceiling on praise is stated as a law of hearers, which sets the limit the rest of the oration will be measured against and then exceededHowever, since our ancestors have stamped this custom with their approval, it becomes my duty to obey the law and to try to satisfy your several wishes and opinions as best I may.Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardsubmission to the frame installed in the first sentence; the objections of the four sentences between are withdrawn by being overruled rather than answered
"I shall begin with our ancestors:Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardit is both just and proper that they should have the honour of the first mention on an occasion like the present.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: metathe order of business is justified as it is announced, which is how a required speech shows that it is following the law rather than the speakerThey dwelt in the country without break in the succession from generation to generation, and handed it down free to the present time by their valour.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardAnd if our more remote ancestors deserve praise, much more do our own fathers, who added to their inheritance the empire which we now possess, and spared no pains to be able to leave their acquisitions to us of the present generation.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe empire enters the oration in a clause about inheritance, as a thing added by fathers and possessed by sons; no war of acquisition is namedLastly, there are few parts of our dominions that have not been augmented by those of us here, who are still more or less in the vigour of life; while the mother country has been furnished by us with everything that can enable her to depend on her own resources whether for war or for peace.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe living claim their share of the ledger before the dead are praised, and the men addressed are the men creditedThat part of our history which tells of the military achievements which gave us our several possessions, or of the ready valour with which either we or our fathers stemmed the tide of Hellenic or foreign aggression, is a theme too familiar to my hearers for me to dilate on, and I shall therefore pass it by.Counter-signal — Decline an expected status marker to imply that one's standing needs no proof. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe battle honours are recited in the sentence that declines to recite them, and the ground given for the omission is that the audience already knows themBut what was the road by which we reached our position, what the form of government under which our greatness grew, what the national habits out of which it sprang; these are questions which I may try to solve before I proceed to my panegyric upon these men; since I think this to be a subject upon which on the present occasion a speaker may properly dwell, and to which the whole assemblage, whether citizens or foreigners, may listen with advantage.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe eulogy of the dead is routed through an account of the city, and the audience is redrawn to include foreigners; from here the praise of Athens counts as praise of the men in the coffins
"Our constitution does not copy the laws of neighbouring states; we are rather a pattern to others than imitators ourselves.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe constitution is introduced by ranking it, and the comparison class is the neighbours whose confederates are in Attica this winterIts administration favours the many instead of the few; this is why it is called a democracy.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardfiled as a report of the name in use; whether the clause instead confers the name turns on the Greek, where the sentence has been read as conceding a label rather than accepting one, and this page does not decide itIf we look to the laws, they afford equal justice to all in their private differences; if no social standing, advancement in public life falls to reputation for capacity, class considerations not being allowed to interfere with merit; nor again does poverty bar the way, if a man is able to serve the state, he is not hindered by the obscurity of his condition.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe claim is made by the man the assembly has elected general year after year, and its three tests — law, standing, poverty — are each stated as a bar that does not operateThe freedom which we enjoy in our government extends also to our ordinary life.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardThere, far from exercising a jealous surveillance over each other, we do not feel called upon to be angry with our neighbour for doing what he likes, or even to indulge in those injurious looks which cannot fail to be offensive, although they inflict no positive penalty.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe tolerance described is enforced by nothing, and the harm it forbids — a look — carries no penalty either; the paragraph's next sentence supplies the sanctionBut all this ease in our private relations does not make us lawless as citizens.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardAgainst this fear is our chief safeguard, teaching us to obey the magistrates and the laws, particularly such as regard the protection of the injured, whether they are actually on the statute book, or belong to that code which, although unwritten, yet cannot be broken without acknowledged disgrace.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardCrawley's "Against this fear is our chief safeguard" has no clear antecedent in the English; the Greek behind it is contested, and the filing here rests on the sentence's function in the paragraph — the ease just described is bounded by an unwritten code whose sanction is disgrace
"Further, we provide plenty of means for the mind to refresh itself from business.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardWe celebrate games and sacrifices all the year round, and the elegance of our private establishments forms a daily source of pleasure and helps to banish the spleen; while the magnitude of our city draws the produce of the world into our harbour, so that to the Athenian the fruits of other countries are as familiar a luxury as those of his own.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe empire appears again as cargo: what arrives at the Piraeus is described by its magnitude and never by the tribute assessment that moves part of it
"If we turn to our military policy, there also we differ from our antagonists.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardWe throw open our city to the world, and never by alien acts exclude foreigners from any opportunity of learning or observing, although the eyes of an enemy may occasionally profit by our liberality; trusting less in system and policy than to the native spirit of our citizens; while in education, where our rivals from their very cradles by a painful discipline seek after manliness, at Athens we live exactly as we please, and yet are just as ready to encounter every legitimate danger.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe openness is conceded to cost something — "the eyes of an enemy may occasionally profit" — and the concession is what licenses the comparison that followsIn proof of this it may be noticed that the Lacedaemonians do not invade our country alone, but bring with them all their confederates; while we Athenians advance unsupported into the territory of a neighbour, and fighting upon a foreign soil usually vanquish with ease men who are defending their homes.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: orientation mismatch — the claim was about how Athenians are raised and the proof offered is a ranking: who needs confederates, and who wins on other men's soil; the premise granted in its own first clause is that the invasion is happening, in the present tenseOur united force was never yet encountered by any enemy, because we have at once to attend to our marine and to dispatch our citizens by land upon a hundred different services; so that, wherever they engage with some such fraction of our strength, a success against a detachment is magnified into a victory over the nation, and a defeat into a reverse suffered at the hands of our entire people.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metaevery dispatch the war will send is filed in advance: an Athenian defeat is a detachment overcome by everyone, an Athenian victory is part of the strength beating all of theirs, and the frame holds whatever the news turns out to beAnd yet if with habits not of labour but of ease, and courage not of art but of nature, we are still willing to encounter danger, we have the double advantage of escaping the experience of hardships in anticipation and of facing them in the hour of need as fearlessly as those who are never free from them.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outward
"Nor are these the only points in which our city is worthy of admiration.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardWe cultivate refinement without extravagance and knowledge without effeminacy; wealth we employ more for use than for show, and place the real disgrace of poverty not in owning to the fact but in declining the struggle against it.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardpoverty is relocated from a condition to a failure of effort, which is a ruling about who may be blamed, delivered as a description of what Athenians happen to thinkOur public men have, besides politics, their private affairs to attend to, and our ordinary citizens, though occupied with the pursuits of industry, are still fair judges of public matters; for, unlike any other nation, regarding him who takes no part in these duties not as unambitious but as useless, we Athenians are able to judge at all events if we cannot originate, and, instead of looking on discussion as a stumbling-block in the way of action, we think it an indispensable preliminary to any wise action at all.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outward"useless" is the filing the city puts on the man who abstains; whether the sentence reports that usage or issues it from the rostrum turns on the Greek word Crawley renders here, and the divergence below leaves it openAgain, in our enterprises we present the singular spectacle of daring and deliberation, each carried to its highest point, and both united in the same persons; although usually decision is the fruit of ignorance, hesitation of reflection.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardBut the palm of courage will surely be adjudged most justly to those, who best know the difference between hardship and pleasure and yet are never tempted to shrink from danger.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwarda verdict in the passive with no judge named — "will surely be adjudged" — awarded to a description the preceding sentences have fitted to Athens aloneIn generosity we are equally singular, acquiring our friends by conferring, not by receiving, favours.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardYet, of course, the doer of the favour is the firmer friend of the two, in order by continued kindness to keep the recipient in his debt; while the debtor feels less keenly from the very consciousness that the return he makes will be a payment, not a free gift.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe mechanics of the generosity just claimed: the favour is done in order to hold the recipient in debt, and the vocabulary of alliance is the vocabulary of creditorsAnd it is only the Athenians, who, fearless of consequences, confer their benefits not from calculations of expediency, but in the confidence of liberality.Status bid — Claim relative standing. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: manipulation — the calculation denied here was supplied in the sentence immediately before, "in order by continued kindness to keep the recipient in his debt"; disinterest is claimed one clause after its accounting has been read out
"In short, I say that as a city we are the school of Hellas, while I doubt if the world can produce a man who, where he has only himself to depend upon, is equal to so many emergencies, and graced by so happy a versatility, as the Athenian.Status bid — Claim relative standing. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe ranking is total and the comparison class is everyone; the assemblage the second paragraph opened to foreigners is standing here to hear itAnd that this is no mere boast thrown out for the occasion, but plain matter of fact, the power of the state acquired by these habits proves.Mismatch-repair — Name the scope or orientation gap itself. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metathe speaker names the filing his own sentence invites — a boast, keyed to standing — and moves it back to the world by offering the empire as the evidenceFor Athens alone of her contemporaries is found when tested to be greater than her reputation, and alone gives no occasion to her assailants to blush at the antagonist by whom they have been worsted, or to her subjects to question her title by merit to rule.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe word "subjects" arrives without preparation, and what is claimed of them is that they do not dispute the title; the parties said to be satisfied are the only parties in the sentence who are not in the roomRather, the admiration of the present and succeeding ages will be ours, since we have not left our power without witness, but have shown it by mighty proofs; and far from needing a Homer for our panegyrist, or other of his craft whose verses might charm for the moment only for the impression which they gave to melt at the touch of fact, we have forced every sea and land to be the highway of our daring, and everywhere, whether for evil or for good, have left imperishable monuments behind us.Counter-signal — Decline an expected status marker to imply that one's standing needs no proof. function: expressive · orientation: belonging · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: orientation mismatch — the poet is declined inside a panegyric, by a panegyrist, in the clause that supplies the verse: "we have forced every sea and land to be the highway of our daring" (low confidence)Such is the Athens for which these men, in the assertion of their resolve not to lose her, nobly fought and died;Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe hinge: five paragraphs of city return to the coffins in one clause, and the dead are given a motive that matches the description just completedand well may every one of their survivors be ready to suffer in her cause.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe first instruction to the living, attached to the eulogy by a conjunction and phrased as a fitness rather than a demand
"Indeed if I have dwelt at some length upon the character of our country, it has been to show that our stake in the struggle is not the same as theirs who have no such blessings to lose, and also that the panegyric of the men over whom I am now speaking might be by definite proofs established.Context-injection — Insist the surround is part of the claim. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: metathe digression is claimed as evidence: the account of Athens is entered as the proof of the men's worth, so that anyone who grants the city has already granted the eulogyThat panegyric is now in a great measure complete;Declaration — Bring a state into being by saying so. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardthe praise of the dead is declared delivered by a speech that has spent its length on the city; the declaring is what makes it deliveredfor the Athens that I have celebrated is only what the heroism of these and their like have made her, men whose fame, unlike that of most Hellenes, will be found to be only commensurate with their deserts.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardAnd if a test of worth be wanted, it is to be found in their closing scene, and this not only in cases in which it set the final seal upon their merit, but also in those in which it gave the first intimation of their having any.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metathe manner of a man's death is installed as the test of his life, and the second clause extends it to men whose lives supplied no other evidence of worth at allFor there is justice in the claim that steadfastness in his country's battles should be as a cloak to cover a man's other imperfections; since the good action has blotted out the bad, and his merit as a citizen more than outweighed his demerits as an individual.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardan accounting rule stated over the coffins: one act settles a record, and the settling is already done — "has blotted out" — before any particular man's record is openedBut none of these allowed either wealth with its prospect of future enjoyment to unnerve his spirit, or poverty with its hope of a day of freedom and riches to tempt him to shrink from danger.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardNo, holding that vengeance upon their enemies was more to be desired than any personal blessings, and reckoning this to be the most glorious of hazards, they joyfully determined to accept the risk, to make sure of their vengeance, and to let their wishes wait; and while committing to hope the uncertainty of final success, in the business before them they thought fit to act boldly and trust in themselves.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: orientation mismatch — the deliberation of the men in the coffins is entered as fact, with joy attributed to the deciding; every witness to it is being buried this afternoon, and the account matches the city described in the preceding paragraphs (low confidence)Thus choosing to die resisting, rather than to live submitting, they fled only from dishonour, but met danger face to face, and after one brief moment, while at the summit of their fortune, escaped, not from their fear, but from their glory.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe closing paradox is Crawley's; the Greek clause has been carried into English both ways round, and the filing here reads the English, where death is entered as an escape at the top of a man's fortune
"So died these men as became Athenians.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: belonging · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardthe dead are certified as having met the standard the city was described by; the eulogy closes here and the instructions beginYou, their survivors, must determine to have as unfaltering a resolution in the field, though you may pray that it may have a happier issue.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe mourners are told to resolve on the same conduct, with the difference between them and the dead reduced to a matter for prayerAnd not contented with ideas derived only from words of the advantages which are bound up with the defence of your country, though these would furnish a valuable text to a speaker even before an audience so alive to them as the present, you must yourselves realize the power of Athens, and feed your eyes upon her from day to day, till love of her fills your hearts; and then, when all her greatness shall break upon you, you must reflect that it was by courage, sense of duty, and a keen feeling of honour in action that men were enabled to win all this, and that no personal failure in an enterprise could make them consent to deprive their country of their valour, but they laid it at her feet as the most glorious contribution that they could offer.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardan instruction to fall in love with the city, given at a burial, with a schedule attached: look daily until the feeling arrives; the aside concedes that words alone will not produce it, in a speech made of wordsFor this offering of their lives made in common by them all they each of them individually received that renown which never grows old, and for a sepulchre, not so much that in which their bones have been deposited, but that noblest of shrines wherein their glory is laid up to be eternally remembered upon every occasion on which deed or story shall call for its commemoration.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe sepulchre a few feet away is demoted inside the sentence — "not so much that in which their bones have been deposited" — and replaced by a shrine with no site, kept in whoever remembersFor heroes have the whole earth for their tomb; and in lands far from their own, where the column with its epitaph declares it, there is enshrined in every breast a record unwritten with no tablet to preserve it, except that of the heart.Declaration — Bring a state into being by saying so. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe burial the city has assembled for is reassigned by the officer the city appointed to speak: the tomb becomes the earth, and the column with its epitaph is demoted to a marker of where a man is not keptThese take as your model and, judging happiness to be the fruit of freedom and freedom of valour, never decline the dangers of war.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe chain runs happiness to freedom to valour and lands on a standing instruction, delivered to men who will be levied again in the springFor it is not the miserable that would most justly be unsparing of their lives; these have nothing to hope for: it is rather they to whom continued life may bring reverses as yet unknown, and to whom a fall, if it came, would be most tremendous in its consequences.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe argument for spending one's life is addressed to the men with the most to lose, which is the class that supplies the hoplites and pays for the fleetAnd surely, to a man of spirit, the degradation of cowardice must be immeasurably more grievous than the unfelt death which strikes him in the midst of his strength and patriotism!Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwarddeath is entered as unfelt, which removes the one thing the audience is standing here to grieve; the exclamation mark is Crawley's
"Comfort, therefore, not condolence, is what I have to offer to the parents of the dead who may be here.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: metacondolence is ruled out of the ceremony before it can be asked for, which makes everything the bereaved are about to be told count as consolation by definitionNumberless are the chances to which, as they know, the life of man is subject; but fortunate indeed are they who draw for their lot a death so glorious as that which has caused your mourning, and to whom life has been so exactly measured as to terminate in the happiness in which it has been passed.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe parents are told their sons drew a good lot, and the measure of the good lot is that the life ended while it was going wellStill I know that this is a hard saying, especially when those are in question of whom you will constantly be reminded by seeing in the homes of others blessings of which once you also boasted: for grief is felt not so much for the want of what we have never known, as for the loss of that to which we have been long accustomed.Mismatch-repair — Name the scope or orientation gap itself. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: metathe speaker files his own consolation as a hard saying and supplies the mechanism by which it will fail, then goes on with itYet you who are still of an age to beget children must bear up in the hope of having others in their stead; not only will they help you to forget those whom you have lost, but will be to the state at once a reinforcement and a security; for never can a fair or just policy be expected of the citizen who does not, like his fellows, bring to the decision the interests and apprehensions of a father.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardmisfire: frame collision — the frame set three sentences earlier promised comfort, and this sentence directs bereaved parents to produce replacements on grounds stated as the city's: reinforcement, security, and fathers voting in the assemblyWhile those of you who have passed your prime must congratulate yourselves with the thought that the best part of your life was fortunate, and that the brief span that remains will be cheered by the fame of the departed.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardthe parents past childbearing are given an instruction they can carry out without leaving the graveside: congratulate yourselvesFor it is only the love of honour that never grows old; and honour it is, not gain, as some would have it, that rejoices the heart of age and helplessness.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outward
"Turning to the sons or brothers of the dead, I see an arduous struggle before you.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardWhen a man is gone, all are wont to praise him, and should your merit be ever so transcendent, you will still find it difficult not merely to overtake, but even to approach their renown.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe inflation worked by funeral praise is named from inside a funeral speech, and the sons are told they will be measured against a figure this ceremony is producingThe living have envy to contend with, while those who are no longer in our path are honoured with a goodwill into which rivalry does not enter.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe law of envy stated in the exordium returns with the sign reversed: there it limited what the speaker could say of the dead, here it explains why the dead cannot be caughtOn the other hand, if I must say anything on the subject of female excellence to those of you who will now be in widowhood, it will be all comprised in this brief exhortation.Frame-set — Install the construal that fixes which moves are legal. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: narrow · target: metathe widows' portion is bounded before it is spoken and its necessity is left conditional, "if I must say anything"; the group addressed last is the group given the least of the speechGreat will be your glory in not falling short of your natural character; and greatest will be hers who is least talked of among the men, whether for good or for bad.Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: mixed · scope: wide · target: outwardan instruction whose content is absence from speech, issued in the one speech a year the whole city is required to attend; the speaker has named it an exhortation and given it the grammar of a prediction
"My task is now finished.Declaration — Bring a state into being by saying so. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardthe duty accepted in the first paragraph is discharged by being pronounced dischargedI have performed it to the best of my ability, and in word, at least, the requirements of the law are now satisfied.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: meta"in word, at least" divides the law's demand in two and reports only half of it met; the other half is paid out in the next sentence, from the treasuryIf deeds be in question, those who are here interred have received part of their honours already, and for the rest, their children will be brought up till manhood at the public expense:Promise — Commit oneself to a future act. function: commissive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe one enforceable undertaking in the oration, and the speaker binds the city rather than himself: an appropriation running until the orphans reach manhoodthe state thus offers a valuable prize, as the garland of victory in this race of valour, for the reward both of those who have fallen and their survivors.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwardthe maintenance of war orphans is described as a prize in a contest, which puts the surviving families among the competitors rather than among the claimantsAnd where the rewards for merit are greatest, there are found the best citizens.Assertion — State that something is the case. function: assertive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: wide · target: outwarda maxim of civic engineering closes the eulogy: the city that pays best is the city that gets the best men, and the payment just specified is the upbringing of the dead men's sons
"And now that you have brought to a close your lamentations for your relatives,Declaration — Bring a state into being by saying so. function: declaration · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardthe mourning is closed by being described as closed, in a subordinate clause, before anyone is asked whether it isyou may depart."Order — Direct another to act. function: directive · orientation: reality · motive: cooperative · scope: narrow · target: outwardthe assembly is dismissed as a court is dismissed, in permissive grammar that leaves no option; the frame opened by the law in the first sentence is closed here, and the city goes home
The divergences
"Most of my predecessors in this place have commended him who made this speech part of the law" — the audience files a Report, an accurate account of what previous speakers have said at this ceremony. A reader who watches what the sentence does files a Frame-set: the speech announces that it is compelled, which converts every claim in it from a man's opinion into an office's discharge, and puts the objections of the next four sentences beyond effect before they are raised. They part on target — whether the sentence relays other speakers or installs the construal all of them spoke inside. The oration closes by dismissing the assembly under the same law, and "the requirements of the law are now satisfied" is where the frame is cashed.
"Its administration favours the many instead of the few; this is why it is called a democracy." — read as an Assertion, the sentence reports a name already in use and explains it. Read as a Declaration, the constitution is named from the rostrum by the man who runs it, and the name takes effect in the naming. They part on function, and the English will not settle it: Crawley's "this is why it is called" can render either a report of usage or a concession of a label the speaker would not have chosen. Every page in this archive before this one was filed from a text in its own language; here the act that a reader files depends on which of two Greek readings the translator was following.
"regarding him who takes no part in these duties not as unambitious but as useless" — an Athenian in the crowd files an Assertion about what his neighbours think of a man who stays home. A man who does stay home files an Order with a penalty attached, issued at a state funeral by the city's first citizen: the abstention has just been named and the name is one nobody can wear. They part on function — a description of civic opinion, or the imposition of it. Crawley's "useless" carries a Greek word whose force is disputed, and the divergence lives exactly where the dispute is.
"And it is only the Athenians, who, fearless of consequences, confer their benefits not from calculations of expediency, but in the confidence of liberality." — Athens files a Status bid that its own conduct earns; a subject city assessed for tribute files it against the sentence immediately above, which states the calculation in terms — "in order by continued kindness to keep the recipient in his debt." They part on motive. The archive's Hiroshima statement runs the same seam, where the sparing of a people is offered by the government promising its destruction, and the paragraph above supplies the accounting; in both, the sentence that claims disinterest is the sentence after the one that prices it.
"For heroes have the whole earth for their tomb" — the mourners file an Assertion, a consoling generality about how the brave are remembered. The city files a Declaration: the officer it elected to speak, standing at the public sepulchre, in the ceremony the law requires, reassigns the grave — the bones stay in the ground and the tomb becomes the earth. They part on function, and the felicity conditions are all present for the second filing, which is why it has been quotable ever since as a fact rather than as a claim. The archive's Pointe du Hoc page holds the sentence's descendant, "the only territories we hold are memorials like this one and graveyards where our heroes rest," where a state again converts its dead into ground it possesses.
"steadfastness in his country's battles should be as a cloak to cover a man's other imperfections" — read narrow, a courtesy extended to the men being buried this afternoon, whose records the city has agreed not to examine. Read wide, a standing rule of Athenian accounting under which any death in the line discharges any prior offence. They part on scope. The sentence generalises to "a man" while the occasion is these men, and the paragraph before it has already extended the test to those whose deaths "gave the first intimation of their having any" merit at all.
"And now that you have brought to a close your lamentations for your relatives, you may depart." — the families file the end of a burial, a permission to go home. The city files the closing of a legal proceeding: the mourning is declared over in the subordinate clause, and the release is granted by the same officer whose appointment the first sentence attributed to the statute. They part on target — whether the words act on the people in front of the speaker or on the frame that put him in front of them. The chapter that follows the oration in Thucydides is the plague.